Chris seems pretty happy with the initial plan of my project according to my pitch. One area which he has indicated he feels I should concentrate on is the actual design of the site, which could be time consuming, tricky and which, he says, will no doubt throw up a lot of problems on the way. Another of the key areas he feels I should focus on is how I will write for kids. As a father of young children, he has advised that things actually don’t need to be oversimplified to the point of boring them, but that the focus should be on engaging them on their level – something I definitely need to look into.